In your English class, you have been talking about how long young people should stay in education.
Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Essay question
All young people should continue at school or college until at least the age of 18. Do you agree?
Notes
Write about:
1. qualifications for jobs
2. students who don't like school
3. ...... (your own idea)
Write your essay
WRITING 1 PG 187
ResponderEliminarNowadays it is mandatory to study to the age of 16, however it does not mean this is the best.
In my country teenagers who are 16 are not qualified for a job because the education system is mainly based in theoric knowledge. They have not been taught how to cope with real life situations until they go to college at the age of 18.
However there are some students who do not like studying. It would be a good option to offer them the opportunity to go to a company and check out how to work in a real environment. In this way they would have a large range of possibilities and choose their best option to carry out with their lives.
In my opinion students should be at school until they are 18 because it is then when they are mature enough to make their own decisions.
In conclusion, the Education System in a country is very important. In the one that I live in many changes are necessary in order to improve the habitants' quality of life.